What do you think of the opening paragraphs of my story?

I really liked this, actually. I think the girl, Bonnie, is dead and she's remembering or trying to remember her mother and her life before she died. That's just my guess, though. I feel like some stuff had too many commas, especially in the first couple descriptive sentences, but I like the eerie vibe this has and the mysterious yet not horribly confusing direction this is going in